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strike from me the truth by ~na-chi:iconna-chi:



Colours, bleeding. I felt them swirl about me, trapping me in their sly gaze.
I was pinned, they knew something about me, how could they have figured it out?
I tried to hide it, I grabbed at myself, tearing my still-beating heart from my chest.

"Here, take it!" I screamed at them, but they would not relent.

I was swept away in their dizzying depths, plunged under.
In a rare moment of clarity, I realized
I would never
surface
again.
©2008 ~na-chi
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ehm. i actually don't know...

this was for a school assignment, i wrote it last year.
it had to be open poetry with emphasis placed on the last words
using spacing.
i just found it on my old hard drive.
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~Narumew:iconNarumew: May 17, 2008, 3:01:19 PM
pffthaaha
i always use emphasis with words
by using spacing.

i'd probably fail
every other poetry unit
of that class then
~na-chi:iconna-chi: May 17, 2008, 4:14:30 PM
we were told to write poetry
using different forms of emphasis
ex. bold, italics, spacing, dialogue, repeated thought
and to use one each unit

c:

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"music this magnificent
and medicine are one and the same
they make life worth living;
hearts worth healing"
~na-chi:iconna-chi: May 17, 2008, 4:14:36 PM
thank you :heart:

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"music this magnificent
and medicine are one and the same
they make life worth living;
hearts worth healing"
=HakuMyPrecious:iconHakuMyPrecious: May 17, 2008, 7:36:44 PM
Last year as in grade 8 or as in 2007 of grade 9?


It's very nice, though 8'D
:hug::heart:


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~na-chi:iconna-chi: May 18, 2008, 9:55:44 AM
2007 of grade 9 ):
as if Elmer would have given us such a cool unit.

thankyou:heart:


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"music this magnificent
and medicine are one and the same
they make life worth living;
hearts worth healing"
=HakuMyPrecious:iconHakuMyPrecious: May 18, 2008, 9:58:15 AM
True, true.

I still do not miss her. |:
I only still miss Mr. Ruzic.
Well, and Mrs. Blain.

You're welcome~


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~na-chi:iconna-chi: May 18, 2008, 12:50:54 PM
i still make jokes about her.
true.


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"music this magnificent
and medicine are one and the same
they make life worth living;
hearts worth healing"
=HakuMyPrecious:iconHakuMyPrecious: May 19, 2008, 8:49:45 AM
XDD

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