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strike from me the truth by ~na-chi:iconna-chi:



Colours, bleeding. I felt them swirl about me, trapping me in their sly gaze.
I was pinned, they knew something about me, how could they have figured it out?
I tried to hide it, I grabbed at myself, tearing my still-beating heart from my chest.

"Here, take it!" I screamed at them, but they would not relent.

I was swept away in their dizzying depths, plunged under.
In a rare moment of clarity, I realized
I would never
surface
again.
©2008-2009 ~na-chi
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i just found it on my old hard drive.
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pffthaaha
i always use emphasis with words
by using spacing.

i'd probably fail
every other poetry unit
of that class then
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we were told to write poetry
using different forms of emphasis
ex. bold, italics, spacing, dialogue, repeated thought
and to use one each unit

c:

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"music this magnificent
and medicine are one and the same
they make life worth living;
hearts worth healing"
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thank you :heart:

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"music this magnificent
and medicine are one and the same
they make life worth living;
hearts worth healing"
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Last year as in grade 8 or as in 2007 of grade 9?


It's very nice, though 8'D
:hug::heart:


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=MaximumChakra, *ZeppTokyoASK, ~Naruto-a-gogo
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2007 of grade 9 ):
as if Elmer would have given us such a cool unit.

thankyou:heart:


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"music this magnificent
and medicine are one and the same
they make life worth living;
hearts worth healing"
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True, true.

I still do not miss her. |:
I only still miss Mr. Ruzic.
Well, and Mrs. Blain.

You're welcome~


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=MaximumChakra, *ZeppTokyoASK, ~Naruto-a-gogo
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#Spicy Marmalade My chatroom.
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i still make jokes about her.
true.


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"music this magnificent
and medicine are one and the same
they make life worth living;
hearts worth healing"
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XDD

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=MaximumChakra, *ZeppTokyoASK, ~Naruto-a-gogo
^ All uber win.
#Spicy Marmalade My chatroom.
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